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I just can't get past the licking of things after they've been in someone's ass. Yuck! Not to mention dangerous from a health perspective (guess you've never had a salmonella or e-choli infection, not sexy!)

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I docked you three points because you had a character who was ordered (coerced) to lick shit off something, in this case a strapon dildo. Even a Dommé needs to protect and take care of her pets. Salmonella or E. coli poisoning is an unacceptable risk, let's just face it.
Otherwise, I like it!

@ChoppedLiver
Look up words you do not use very often, but sound impressive. Like ‘bilious’ and ‘furloughed’ and ‘embarrassment’ (just stretched too far) and ‘pie-eyed’ (hyphen needed, and poorly used as a ‘drunk’ sub)
A major international intrigue was foreshadowed by Hubby’s disrespect for ‘suits’ without credentials or passion for NASA and its missions. Hubby pointed out that the crew selection stank like a skunk, dead from salmonella last week. Part3 spans about 4 months. Either this was a deliberate distraction or there will be a flashback of Hubby doing what he does best … fixing important things as efficaciously and quietly as possible. But he would have to have been working on that before Sweetie left.
Still way too much repetition … as soliloquies (no lack of dialogue from this author.
3*. but gonna skim through subsequent parts.

You sir, have been watching actors perform pornagraphy way too much. (Notice that I correctly used the double 'o' format for 'to'. Your editor missed your mistake.) Quoting:
...Diljan slowed, then pulled out. Lori immediately began tonguing Julie's gaping ass.
DISGUSTING AND NASTY! Porn stars have multiple enemas before they do an act like this to be certain that the bowels have been thoroughly flushed of ALL feces. This act performed as you described it would have resulted in Lori eating Julie's shit which would have more than likely given her a disease. My first wife's brother is gay and became sick with Salmonella after rimming his boyfriend.
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I really didn't see the point of ruining Julie and Lori's date with the attack considering that you had already planned on ending the story before Leeland and Julie even boarded the Liberty for the extended cruise. In fact, your choice of where to wrap your story made little sense at all. This chapter was a let down compared with the first one.
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I also wanted to point out that if Leeland and Julie BOTH held crushes for each other prior to Julie getting married, something should have happened to clue in either one or the other that there was something stronger between them. The two of them suddenly finding out that they had feelings for each other that had lain repressed for ten years or longer felt extremely contrived. 4/5

@Micheal56smith… timings… yes I totally agree. I’m thinking half the food the eat is either raw or burnt but since they’ve only eaten rat, Nutri bars, military rations and mi.Italy galley food that they just don’t know that it’s raw or burnt. And well Rachel who has had good and great food is just being polite.
But this is a story so belief suspension is required. However it is mentioned somewhere before or after this chapter that John only cooks using traditional methods aka what we do, so direct heat methods and doesn’t use the ‘cooking machine’ that cooks anything in a minute, because his grandma said it just doesn’t taste the same. So that means normal cooking times are still required.
Since they don’t have a chef that spends the day making food and cleaning up after 6 other people then they definitely need their cooking ‘Space Magic’ to protect them from salmonella at a minimum.
For me to make a traditional beef Rogan Josh curry (no tomato or onion or ginger but using assifoetida and rattan jot) takes me 3 1/2 hours go to woe not including loading up the dish washer afterwards. Their 20 minute lasagna takes me 40 min to make a sauce from scratch and then cook the mince in that while I make a white sauce and the lasagna sheets soak in water. Then 5 min to assemble and 40 min in the oven. So 1 1/2 hours to cook from scratch. Fuck bottled sauce ( I bottle cooked puréed tomatoes I have left over for the off/ winter season) We eat it as a winter meal anyway.
So basically all the food timings are rubbish and just a place holder number to fit it into the story time line. I get the need and truthfully I just don’t care, not really. I tray it as the20 minutes as just a quick slapped together meal and the longer ones as a meal that they have really taken their time and loving care with so they can feed their lovers a special meal. As in I’m only prepared to spend 20 minutes on this food to feed the troops compared to I’m going to devote a couple of hours to this meal to please my lovers.